I did a lot of travel in Europe, that i love it , but the more special trip was
the last summer to Valparaiso.
I went with my best friends , my brother and my boyfriend. We stayed in the city around 3 days, in the grandmother's house of one of my friend.
These days were the cultural carnival, so in all the city were stages whit music, theather and dance. During the day we went to some cultural activity or we walked aronund the hills, one of my friend lived in Valparaiso , so we had our own guide because ¡he show us the spetial places.
At night we went to concerts out side in the street, the concerts were very spetial for many of us because the artist were Kevin Johansen , Camila Moreno, Intillimani and Aterciopelados.After the concerts we went to some interesting pubs to drink something or danced in a disco.
We didn't have enought money so all the days we cook our food with a low budget. Also in the morning we went to the beach to walk and swim, and we has a very good weather.
This trip was special because we laughed a lot and a lot of funny things happened to us. Also was a good time with all the group that maked us more closed. Also, it was the firts time that my boy friend came and met my friends, and they become friend very fast.
the last summer to Valparaiso.
I went with my best friends , my brother and my boyfriend. We stayed in the city around 3 days, in the grandmother's house of one of my friend.
These days were the cultural carnival, so in all the city were stages whit music, theather and dance. During the day we went to some cultural activity or we walked aronund the hills, one of my friend lived in Valparaiso , so we had our own guide because ¡he show us the spetial places.
At night we went to concerts out side in the street, the concerts were very spetial for many of us because the artist were Kevin Johansen , Camila Moreno, Intillimani and Aterciopelados.After the concerts we went to some interesting pubs to drink something or danced in a disco.
We didn't have enought money so all the days we cook our food with a low budget. Also in the morning we went to the beach to walk and swim, and we has a very good weather.
This trip was special because we laughed a lot and a lot of funny things happened to us. Also was a good time with all the group that maked us more closed. Also, it was the firts time that my boy friend came and met my friends, and they become friend very fast.
I like Valparaiso, because it has narrow streets, small squares ... is a beautiful city. I think the best trip is one that is done with friends or family
ResponderEliminarI love Valparaiso, is a beautiful city, I love his English-style buildings ... always a good place to visit.
ResponderEliminarB!
Good Paloma.
ResponderEliminarThere are some mistakes of subject-verb agreement which you should pay attention to. For example, "in all the cities was stages." Can you see what´s wrong?
I´ll get back to you in class.
2 points.
Paula