martes, 13 de abril de 2010

the earthquake

I don't have an exaiting history about the earthquake. I was in my home city, Los Andes. In Los Andes the intence of the earthquake was not so big, because we are in the north of Santiago, I think that the earthquake was 6.5 magnitude. That day i was in my bed , because i had to work the saturday early in the morning. i felt nothing in the first seconds, and went i woke , i standed up really slow, because i thought that it would stoped but that not happen , and them my mother came to my bed room and picked to me and my brother, and together we went to the front door of the house and we waited under thear. The water on the dish of my dog was really jumped,the light of the street throwed sparks and the cars in the street moved a lot. i was quiet , but when the earthquake become with kore power , i felt worry. When that stoped i went to the house of my best friend bacause she was alone in her house.My mother was really nervous because two of my brothres wasen in house of friends; want in Los Andes and the other in Viña del Mar. Fortunately all my famuly and friends wasen good. Now I feel a big paint for all the people in the south of Chile that lost they house and family.

6 comentarios:

  1. im glad to know that your family is ok and nathing happened to them, and like me you only has the scare of that night and maybe the worry for the other peolple and about what we can do for them.
    finally all the historis are very similar and we all have a new experience each other.

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  2. Paloma, I'm glad that your family and friends are well after the earthquake. Unfortunately there were many dead and many injured. I hope the state can help the people of the south, especially the most isolated communities. See you !

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  3. Fortunately I have not experienced an earthquake, but I think it must be terrifying sopbr especially in this area where the magnitude was high. I'm surprised by your Experiense

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  4. Good Paloma.

    Some problems with word formation and past tense.

    Double check your post with a classmate,

    You get 2 points.

    Paula

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  5. Hi paloma, i think that you're story is really exiting, i didn't feel it, that's not exiting,... jajjaa
    i hope yo're still ok like your family. !

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  6. Hi Paloma. ¿How are you?.I will correct your current publication:

    You say: "i felt nothing in the first seconds, and went i woke". But, what was?. you do not specify in the sentence. For example: i felt nothing in the firtst seconds, and it went i woke

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